Thetageist's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Castleman]

This is actually a really cool-sounding title screen theme song! The different parts you add together sound really interesting, and it fits together as a coherent whole. Really nice.

SuperKoolRaven responds:

Thanks :D

[Crunktown]

It sounds like a very strange boss/level theme, for a very strange boss/level, and I love it.

SuperKoolRaven responds:

Lol
Thanks :D

[Night Chaser]

Ooh, fun! Definitely a lot of variety in this song, keeping the recurring elements to make it a coherent whole. Compositionally interesting, works really well for retro video game music.

[Lithium metal, dude!]

I like the aggressive edge the guitars give the song! Works really well for a racing or fighting game.

[Lithium Metal Speedway (Megadrive)]

Very good retro game feel, very fun! Compositionally interesting, even despite being basic and loop-y. Nice work!

[Lapis' Battle Theme (SjälTale )-LapisTheWolf]

This is some pretty interesting music, even though it doesn't sound energetic enough to be much of a "battle theme" to me. The Undertale sound effects were a fun touch (psst, by the way, because of those you need to mark that your track has 3rd party samples in it). My favorite part is around 01:15 - it has similar vibes and even similar instruments to Terraria's nighttime music. It sounds like the synth doing the Megalovania-esque thing comes in a couple beats early at around 1:44, which means it doesn't always line up with the other stuff. But otherwise, really nice work, and I hope you return to this idea later!

Shady Cicada has a few videos on making video game battle/boss theme music, maybe those might be helpful?

LapisTheWolf responds:

ok thank you!!

[Mettaton Dance Sequence - LapisTheWolf]

It actually sounds pretty good, but not necessarily for the purpose you intended it for. I'd consider this more ambient background music for a minimalist game, rather than something I could dance to. I think it's because there is very rarely any kind of percussion or any other strong indicator of where the beats are, and when it is there, it's pretty quiet. If it is supposed to be truly ambient, as the tag suggests, maybe it'd be good to name the title something else or explain the intended context in the description? And if it is meant to be dance music, I actually found a couple tutorials for how to write dance music on YouTube - I'm not sending any links because I figure it'd be better to just let you find the one that works best for you. Hope this helps!

LapisTheWolf responds:

ty!!

[Pure Light (Själtale) - LapisTheWolf]

Hey, you're actually starting to get somewhere here! I can tell that you've got a recurring melody in the piece, as well as an amount of structure! I'm thinking what's needed here is more of an intention with how you use the structure, like what's going to be the arrival point where you go all-in, that the audience will remember afterward. There's also a little bit of musical rambling in the melody and subsequent piano line around 2 minutes in - I recommend you do research on how phrases, cadences, and harmonization work in music, that would help you provide the melody with some structure. Musictheory.net is always a good resource for learning music concepts and how to implement them in your songs. But yeah, it's definitely improving! And the first part of that melody actually kinda sounds like Undertale music :)

LapisTheWolf responds:

TY!!

[Tear's Theme (SjälTale) - LapisTheWol]

A nice peaceful song! It'd probably go well as background music for a cutscene, but if I were to judge it as music to listen to by itself, I would say that it needs to have more of a memorable high point somewhere, or a memorable melody or riff - that's generally what keeps people coming back to a song, or at least that's what will keep me coming back. Again, since this is meant to be a theme song for a character, it would be very useful to have something unique that audience members will remember and mentally connect to that character. For instance, if I were to play Megalovania out of the blue, you would instantly think of Sans. I can gather resources for you if you want to bolster your melody-writing skills - I know where to find them. :)

LapisTheWolf responds:

Thank you!

[Welcome to the show - MegaDrive ver.]

I haven't heard the original, but once again, really nice use of the 16 bit instruments to fill out the background!